Journal #6

In my revisions of my pastiche rough draft I chose to revise a good portion of my writing. I mainly focused on the sentence structures and complexity and the dialogue. Most of my writing needed to be taken up a level. Some of it was written with a humor that did not fit the mood or theme I was trying to progress towards. I gave the writing a more sophisticated appeal in my eyes and sped up the pace some so that the reader might stay more interested in this time. I think my revisions definitely helped my pastiche progress towards the final copy.